To start from the beginning, find the prologue here
Chapter 10
The
sun stretched lazily across the town square, spilling morning light into every
corner when the door to Darren’s cottage creaked open. The gypsy girl glided
across the threshold to join the men around the fire. She slid into Darren’s open
arms and kissed him softly.
Seth
turned away, uncomfortable. It was one thing to want to kiss a girl. It was
quite another to watch your older brother do it. The rest of the men stared
openly.
Darren
cleared his throat and searched through the women in the square. “Where’s that
sister of ours, anyway? I want Kira to meet her and I haven’t seen her since--”
He trailed off, suddenly unsure of when the last time was that he’d seen
her.
Kira
almost jumped. “Your… sister?” she asked, too innocently.
“Briana. You’ve never met her before, have you?”
“No,”
she said slowly. “I might have seen her from afar the other night, though. At
the well.”
“That’s
odd,” Darren muttered. “I wonder what she was doing there. Was she with anyone?”
Kira
winced. “I think she was with… my brother.”
“Your
BROTHER?? And she’s not been back? Why didn’t you say something last
night??” he demanded.
Kira
leveled him with a sardonic glance. “We were a little busy.”
Darren
jumped to his feet and began pacing, muttering to himself. “I told her
to stay away from him. And now she’s gone and gotten herself kidnapped by
that—“
“She seemed to be going willingly,” she
interrupted. “I’m not sure that he kidnapped her.”
He
waved that away and turned to Seth. “Brother, welcome to manhood. Come on, we’re getting our sister back.” With
that, he turned on his heel, leaving Kira standing open-mouthed in front of the
cottage.
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“What
will we do when we get there?” Seth asked, as they crossed the bridge. “What if
they have Bri tied up somewhere?”
“We’ll
manage,” came the grim reply.
“But
what if they have weapons?” the younger brother persisted.
Darren
stopped and said quietly, “You and Briana are my family. You are the only
family I have left.” He clapped a hand heavily onto Seth’s shoulder. “I would do
anything necessary to keep you safe.”
Nodding,
Seth continued on in silence. As they
reached the outskirts of the gypsy camp, they paused behind cover of foliage to
peer inside. Five wagons surrounded a
campfire that still burned low from the morning’s breakfast. The camp was
mostly deserted, save for a lone woman who flitted from one spot to another
like a little bird, picking up pottery here and dropping it into the washing
basin there. She was singing quietly to
herself, a gentle smile at her lips. She looked extremely familiar, but nothing
at all like a kidnapped victim.
Darren
strode into the camp. “Briana,” he said conversationally. “Interesting to see
you here.”
Briana
whirled around, surprise in her eyes. “Darren! Oh Darren, you shouldn’t be here. You know what happens when you two occupy the
same…” She sought for the right word, “continent.”
Darren’s
lips twitched. “Can I help it if he makes me want to hit things? Or him? You know, I’d heard that my little
sister had been seen in the company of the Gypsy King, and I thought ‘Well,
that can’t be right. I’ve told her time and time and time again to stay away
from that wretched thieving nuisance. She wouldn’t possibly defy me and
actually go off with him.’ Naturally, I assumed you’d been kidnapped and taken
against your will.” The cheerfulness faded from his tone and he demanded, “We’re
here to correct that. We’re going home.”
Darren
turned on his heel, nodding at his younger brother, and stalked quickly out of
the camp, Seth hopping to keep up with him.
Seth looked behind them, and nudged Darren’s shoulder. Briana hadn’t
moved. They returned slowly to the campfire and Darren fixed his sister with a
stony glare. “Is there a reason you’re still here?”
“I’m
not going,” Briana said simply.
“Oh?
Have you decided to take up a life of thievery too?”
“Darren,
please. Sit,” she gestured to a log around the campfire. “I don’t know to
explain it to you, Darren. When he looks
at me, he makes me feel like I am the only woman in the world. And when he
touches me—“ Briana paused. This was
perhaps not the best tactic to take with her brother. “He just makes me feel
safe and loved and cared for. He listens to me. And I—I think I love him.”
Darren
sighed and dropped his head into his hands.
She
dropped to her knees and put a hand on his arm. “Darren, I just want to be
happy. Can’t you understand that? He makes me happy.”
He
looked up into her eyes. “If I ever hear of him laying so much as a finger on
you in anger, I kill him. Understand?”
A
smile of joy broke out over Briana’s face and she threw her arms around her
brother. “Thank you,” she whispered. “Thank
you so much.”
“Don’t
make me regret it,” Darren responded gruffly.
Kira watched Darren and Seth return from the bridge with trepidation. They were alone. “Was she not there?” she asked with forced lightness as they approached her.
“She
was there,” was Darren’s reply. “She just wouldn’t come back.”
Kira
kicked a pebble at her feet. What should
she say? Good? I’m sorry? At least
there’ll be more room in the cottage? But she was saved from the need to
respond when Darren reached for her and buried his face in her hair.
“I
just feel like I failed them,” he whispered. “I promised my parents I would take
care of her.”
Kira
pulled back and laid her palm against his cheek. “You’ve done that, Darren. I know you don’t like my brother, and I guess
I don’t blame you. But, he’ll be good to
her. He loves her.”
“Loves
her?” Darren was skeptical. “How would
you know that?”
She
smiled. “He’s stolen more of her laundry
off the line behind your cottage than everything else he’s ever stolen
combined. Trust me.”

Once again, Jo, you leave the reader wanting more! Great job! Having real faces for all the characters is a wonderful visualization. :)
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:) Thanks Jeanne... I'm really glad that you liked it. I value your opinion a lot, and it really does mean a lot to me. You guys have given me a lot of "maybe I COULD do this" confidence...
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DeleteI had some laugh out loud moments. It was great.
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I'm delighted you liked it!
DeleteHello and good luck with your A-Z! 'A' can be for whatever you want it to be :)
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thanks Duncan! Same to you!
DeleteYou know I enjoyed it! I'm just sorry there's not going to be another chapter. And don't think I didn't notice which one you married off & which one you left single! ;)
ReplyDeleteJudi W.
ha... Well, I wouldn't read too much into that. I'm pretty sure Briana will be pregnant by month's end, and then he's off the market. ;)
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